this is just a blah week critque becuse im not much of a 'critquer' but if you can, use a better camera and iron the flag. also make sue it completely covers up the backround. the camera would give a much clearer vision and the lighting would be better; some of the parts of the picture are quite blurry. Also, you could have moved the gun down a little, not being able to see most of your face somewhat took away effect. the overall concept*thumbs up* but anybody can use impovement right?^^ this is mt first critque so not much experience here. hope this helped.